TOEFL Academic Discussion

托福写作-学术讨论

Requirements

Grammar

The response appears to be strong. There may be only a few errors with the following features:

  • Sentence fragments
  • Run-on sentences?(A run-on sentence occurs when two independent clauses run together without proper punctuation or appropriate conjunctions. Incorrect: Raffi sings upbeat children’s songs he is an excellent musician.)
  • Confusing sentences
  • Subject-verb agreement
  • Verb formation
  • Pronoun errors
  • Possessive error (missing an apostrophe)?
  • Wrong or missing words

Usage

The response appears to be strong. There may be only a few errors with the following features:

  • Missing, extra, or incorrectly used articles
  • Confused words
  • Wrong or nonstandard word forms
  • Incorrect comparisons?
  • Preposition errors
  • Negation errors?
  • Wrong part of speech

Mechanics

Errors in mechanics only impact performance when they interfere with comprehensibility. The response appears to be strong. There may be only a few errors with the following features:

  • Spelling
  • Capitalization
  • Missing punctuation
  • Hyphen error
  • Compound words
  • Duplicated words or phrases
  • Extra commas

Organization Development

One or more of the following features could not be found in the response:

  • Thesis statement?
  • Main ideas
  • Supporting ideas
  • Introductory material?
  • Transitional words and phrases

Thesis

Thesis statement

Sums up the main point of your paper. 1 or 2 sentences long. Appears at the end of your introduction. Say goodbye to going-off topic.

Introductory material

This section introduces the topic or problem in an interesting, general, and professional manner.

Run-on sentences

A run-on sentence occurs when two independent clauses run together without proper punctuation or appropriate conjunctions.

  • Incorrect: Raffi sings upbeat children’s songs he is an excellent musician.

  • Correct: Raffi sings upbeat children’s songs; he is an excellent musician.

  • Incorrect: I will watch The Office you do your homework.

  • Correct: I will watch The Office while you do your homework.