资料
心得技巧和原则
TOEFL:
- 一定要明确表达观点
- 不基于考生的真实身份
- 考察语言水平,不考察思想水平。(没有创新idea)
- 写作考试不测试考生的真实的想法
- 写作基于表达,而不是基于翻译
- 写作不同于平时写作
- 写作内容和语言同等重要(不要花哨)
- 观点的层次比观点的数目更重要
- 逻辑错误比语法错误更严重
- 跑题你完蛋了
- 适当写长
- 25 words+ 的句子有3句以上
写作训练方案:
-
写出来,写正确,写漂亮
-
写作基本知识/应试技巧
-
The best structures
-
the best reasons
-
the best examples
-
the best sentences
托福作文是解释因果关系,就涉及到两者的互相影响。所以”影响“这个表达很重要。
翻译是expressing idea, 不是word by word translation.
翻译练习和常见重要表达
科学技术的发展使人们非常轻松地学习知识。
The development of science and technology.
- 使: enable/make
- 人们:people
- person: 非一般的人(鬼鬼祟祟)
- people: 正常人
- 非常:
very/unusually/extraordinarily/uncommonly/suprisingly/amazingly/astonishingly/shockingly/dramatically/impressively/notably/remarkably/considerably/noticeably/strikingly/exceedingly/extremely/largely/crazyly/greatly/tremendously/significantly/enormously - 不可或缺/必须的: indispensable/necessary
- 大: A great number/considerable/big
越来越多的人意识到环境保护的重要性。
-
越来越多:
more and more, a growing number, an increaing number of, an expending number of, a rising number of(countable), a rising amount of(uncountable), in increasing amounts, the number of … is growing/increasing/rising -
越来越小: decrease/diminish/shrink
-
可数:a number of …
-
不可数:an amount of …
-
More and more butterflies.
-
A growing number of butterflies.
-
An incresing number of butterflies.
-
Pigs in decreasing numbers
越来越多的父母把越来越多的钱投到了孩子的教育上。
- More and more parents spend more and more money on children’s education.
- A growing number of parents spend a growing amount of money on children’s education.
- Parents in growing numbers spend money in growing amounts on children’s education.
- The number of parents who spend a gowing amount of money on children’s education is growing.
意识到
- realize/ learn/ be aware of / know / understand
环境保护
- environmental protection
A growing number of people realize that the environmental protection is of considerable importance.
很重要
- be of importance
- play an important role
我认为在我们社区建工厂是不好的。
Building factories in our community brings disadvantages.
社区
- community/ neighberhood
建工厂
- factory building
- building factories
不好的
badnot good- inappropriate/improper
- do harm/ do no good
- bring disadvatages
- bring negative influences
大量的
- numerous
- massive
- a considerable number of
- a considerable amount of
我认为
I think- I assume/argue/consider
- In my opinion
东西: stuff
- We have learned a considerable number of things from TV.
由于年龄的关系(年龄差距大),父母亲对孩子的了解有时还不如他们的同伴。
Because of the considerable difference in age,
The age gap is considerabl(大).
同伴:fellow/companion/peers/friends
要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力,他们的工作效率会有大提高。
The team’s work efficiency will significantly improve if everybody tries his best.
The team’s work efficiency will considerably improve if everybody tries his best.
竭尽全力
- spare no effort
- make every effort
- put all one’s heart into
- do one’s utmost
- be fully devoted
- heart and soul
提高
- increase
- improve
语言环境对外语学习的影响是很大的。
The language environment(atomsphere)
to do sth = doing sth. = the doing of sth = sth. doing
外语学习= to learn foreign languages = learning foreign languages = the learning of foreign languages = foreign language learning
影响 influence vt./n. 及物动词/可数名词
F influences B negatively/positively/considerably.
An influence.
The language environment influences the learning of foreign languages considerably.
The influence of A on B is positive.
The influence of A on B is considerably positive.
A brings/has/exerts negative influence on B.
The language environment exerts considerable influence on foreign language learning.
我们要像保护自己亲人那样保护野生动物。
亲人:relatives/ family member
Protect/safeguard
wild animals
- We should protect wild animals like protecting our family members.
- We should protect wild animals as we protect our family members.
我们在电视上学会了很多东西。
from TV, on TV, by watching TV.
好多: many/much/a lot of/ a great number of / a considerable number of
东西: stuff/things
We have learned a considerable number of useful stuff by watching TV.
By watching TV, we have learned a great number of useful stuff.
我认为
- I feel, think, hold, claim, believe, deem, maintain, reckon, argue, assume that …
- in my opinion
- from my point of view
- from my perspective/angle
- A I see/ view / perceive the problem/ question / issue / case/ discussion/ argument/ controversy
- My viewpoint/ belief/ opinion is that …
句子训练方法
- 用多种方法表达同一句意
- 扩充句子;同位语,插入语,非谓语,从句,并列结构
A对B很重要
- A is important to B.
- A plays an important part/role in B.
- A is of (great/amazing/enormous/considerable/remarkable) importance/significance to B
- B cannot live/develop/grow/survice without A.
- A means a lot/agreat deal/much to B.
- The importance of A to B can never be exaggerated/denied/ignored/doubted.
- A is essential/significant/crucial/viata/indispensable
- A is everything/the whole world to B
- A is fundamental/basic/elementary/rudimentary/underlying to B
- A matters/counts to B
- Nothing is more important to B
- Nothing is the mater of A to B
- A is to B what C is to D
- A is to B what the foundation is to a skyscraper/ water is to fish/ the heart is to a human
教育对国家的发展很重要。
- Education is of considerable importance to a country’s development.
- Education plays a significant role in a country’s development.
- Education is important to the development of a nation.
- The importance of education to the development of a nation can never be exaggerated/denied/ignored/doubted.
句子的变化
- 开头的变化(名词,不定时,介词词组,分词,从句,动名词,代词…)
- 结尾的变化
- 长短句的变化
- 主被动(尽量用主动)
COVID also takes a more serious toll on(损害) the body than either colds or the flu.